Fun Run By Frank Brown

13 June 2012
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Tawa Intermediate Fun Run

On Wednesday the 13th of June we had our school fun run at Tawa Intermediate School. It was a five kilometer fun run which meant we had to run six laps around the top college field but we could run more laps if we wanted.My friend Daniel and I ran the fun run together. As our syndicate Tui is called, Daniel and I start off bursting with energy for our first lap.

This is Daniel and I

As we come to the end of our first lap Daniel and I are very happy to have finished our first lap.We knew that once we had finished our first lap that the amazing fun run was just getting started.As Daniel and I came to the hill I took a sip of my powerade and Daniel took a sip of his water.We felt an incredible energy rush pumping through our vaines as we had conquered the hill.

This is Nathan and I

We felt so bizarre to have finished our third lap, we were halfway there and we kept going.
Mine and Daniel’s aim was to get at least nine laps.When we finished our fourth lap we went to Miss Moran who congratulated both of us.We thanked her and carried on running.When Daniel and I passed Miss Christie we told her we were aiming for nine laps and she told us that someone had already finished their eighth lap.We were only just finishing our 5th lap.We knew we had to pick up the pace, we both took a drink then kept running.

                                                    This is Kolio and Ben

Our legs were killing us, we both wanted to stop we looked at each other then looked back at the track and kept on going.Daniel and I saw our friend Noah so all three of us ran together until the end.We came to the end of our ninth lap, we had done it, we had finished our 9 laps!

By Frank Brown Room 9